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The art of the piece was really magnificant. Unfortunately, the humor was weak and the story was really weak. It kind of seemed like an inside joke that developed between friends and turned into an animation. I'd rather see a flash with horrible art and a good story than the other way around.
The voice acting wasn't great. The sound quality wasn't too good, as well, but I can't really hold that against you. Save up for a better mic. :P
Author's Response:
I dont think you should judge the story from the set-up episodes just yet. Waffle X's current run-time is 10 minutes in total, and to get anywhere with a good plot you need to set the foundations of character and setting.
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I thought it was very well put together. I liked it alot. I think the score should be higher than a 2.40, but oh well. I expect more from you in the future.
Oh, and I felt like the beginning (where the toads are knocking on the doors) was a little too long. It probablly lost the interest to alot of people right off the bat.
Author's Response:
Yea I learned from the beginning part. Believe me, the next installment will run smoother than this one. I hoped it was higher than 2.41 but hey, everyone isn't going to like you. Thank you for voting for me. I'll try to get the next installment asap.
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You held the "No, I'm the king of the Portal" out too long. I was starting to think that's all there was too the cartoon. The eyebrow thing was very funny though.
Author's Response:
Yes, if one was familiar to my previous works, they would think that part was the end.
It was a trick loop.
I believe it worked on many people.
Thank you for your kind words and numbers.
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"It sucks that they cut it short."
It was really good. The portion they cut out was just as good, mabye even better than the part they left in. I'm glad you resubmited it so we could see the whole thing. Did they do this to any other of the TSAH cartoons?
Author's Response:
Starwberry Clock had to change his hidden Easter Egg due to file size, and I think Joint Productions had thiers economised. The overall result is great though, and is testament to Rubberninja's animation splicing skills.
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The stuff you guys were doing wasn't very impressive... or funny for that matter.
Author's Response:
see below
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Even though it had no sound, I liked it. It was funny and the graphics wern't all that bad either. A big upgrade from Jack in the Box.
Author's Response:
funny thing is this was my first movie and not really a upgrade from my newest flash on new grounds.
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It was animated beautifully, and it was quite funny, but it's been done many times over. It's time to come up with something that doesn't end with the word "Unloaded."
The music bothered me alittle too. The Chour and the drum beat didn't stay in time together at times.
Author's Response:
Haha, I feel the same way Dude, when I started this, Matrix Revolution just came out. It would have felt alot fresher if I had finished when I was supposed to....
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Senseless violence. Didn't find it funny.
Author's Response:
I'm starting to make movies with not as much blood in them, so look forward to my movies coming out
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I loved your art and style especially. Though, even though your animation was good, it need alittle more. Some expressions mabye.
Other than that there wasn't uch problems. The voice acting was good, the loop got alittle anoying after a while. (But that is to be expected while using a loop) I think a 'stop music' button would have helped.
Keep up the good work. 3/5
Author's Response:
THANKS!!! Yeah, I was thinking in adding a different song for the deaths, because it can get really annoying after a while.
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Pretty funny. I stopped after it told me "I needed to get a life" and said "Humm... Enjoying the view?" about 5 times. After about the 13 digit it stops. (For all of you claiming yougot to 15...)
4/5
Author's Response:
haha...guys...*I* don't even know up to how many digits it goes!!
haha
yeah it's good to follow the advices of a burfing monkey, I always do!
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